"""Expo""": Takashi Shimizu is the director of the movie Grudge...complete failure at the BOX OFFICE because of “casting” and still he decided to create PART 2...made his submission to Etsuko “Wen”...”Semen” is considered a source of protein...”Grubs” are “immature” (pro teen) beetle (larval) also possesing a lot of protein. “Indus Trees” are havens for Slugs which are “slippery”...D.C snipers John Allen Muhammad and Lee Boyd “Malvo”. 'Sistine' Chapel (painted by Michelangelo, which was also a “MISSION”) “Pie” (usually 8 slices)hence food “Mission” sponsorship, Debra Shaun...Pi/3.14, 3+1+4= 8 which is HALF of 16 (bars) (no relation to the circumference of a circle)...“Lee” Malvo did not get sentence to execution or “DEATH”...”C.E.A.L” The Council on East Asian Libraries (Ancient statistical data)...Ancient Egyptian Seals were used as proof of identity and authenticity . I'm true to what I stated in the forum. “HIGHER level than those considered dope (heroin)...”Heroic” (brave),,,the rest is self explanatory. Peace Gods Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-11-13 16:02:19

GL famo...proper drop Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-11-13 16:02:54

2 serious verses..one had a sickker opener..both had dope flow one hadd a more complex verse n harder punches fairs in Voted: GRizzEAT / GodTheReptilian
Posted on: 2010-11-13 18:54:54

Damn...this was a good battle, however poet had some sicker punchlines and metaphors, fv vb GB! Voted: GRizzEAT / GodTheReptilian
Posted on: 2010-11-13 20:33:40

Suprised here for real. One seems to of elevated a lot recently. Other had a dope verse but i think tried too hard and needs to work on the presentation of the wordplay. Champ vote. Voted: GRizzEAT / GodTheReptilian
Posted on: 2010-11-14 02:26:43

Everything was pretty much explained in the comments above me. Good battle from both dude's. One had the overall better verse as his punches were harder. No hate..Close Voted: GRizzEAT / GodTheReptilian
Posted on: 2010-11-14 09:45:15

^ were u readin or jx guessin? Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-11-14 10:13:16

no hate, it was a close one...... Voted: GRizzEAT / GodTheReptilian
Posted on: 2010-11-14 10:42:47

Both were dope as shit man no lie, but one to me just like it was slightly better but good battle to both. Voted: GRizzEAT / GodTheReptilian
Posted on: 2010-11-14 10:46:05

@ Grizzy, dude stop going to everyone's profile complaining about thier vote...lol. Take this punishment...big ups to the emcees thats actually reading the verses. Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-11-14 11:34:17

gb Voted: GRizzEAT / GodTheReptilian
Posted on: 2010-11-14 11:36:28

@ Griz. That's were ur question should have gone to.. ^^^ Voted: GRizzEAT / GodTheReptilian
Posted on: 2010-11-14 11:40:48

better punches came from poet both had killa flow, but god poet kills tha word play n thats what won the battle i think both mc's got skill no h8 (respect) Voted: GRizzEAT / GodTheReptilian
Posted on: 2010-11-14 11:45:58

hard decision Voted: GRizzEAT / GodTheReptilian
Posted on: 2010-11-14 12:10:33

LOL...I HOLLA'D AT ANON ON SOME JOKIN SHIT!!! quit boostin... Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-11-14 12:36:47

Dope verses from both yall, real talk. Both verses had some hard hitting punches so im going with the verse i thought was a lil more complex with the wordplay..No hate at all, FV is in. Voted: GRizzEAT / GodTheReptilian
Posted on: 2010-11-14 12:49:44

nice Voted: GRizzEAT / GodTheReptilian
Posted on: 2010-11-14 12:55:40

Felt one was more diverse it was evenly matche one ha wordplay the other had punces one cut it for me but both ya thing Voted: GRizzEAT / GodTheReptilian
Posted on: 2010-11-14 13:50:29

nice shit Voted: GRizzEAT / GodTheReptilian
Posted on: 2010-11-14 15:52:32

good shit for both Voted: GRizzEAT / GodTheReptilian
Posted on: 2010-11-14 16:10:07

fv is in dope reads!! usally dont vote aggainst grizz this time its a must no hate vb pm if expos needed Voted: GRizzEAT / GodTheReptilian
Posted on: 2010-11-14 17:01:46

damn Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-11-14 17:42:16

poet got it Voted: GRizzEAT / GodTheReptilian
Posted on: 2010-11-14 18:34:09

close Voted: GRizzEAT / GodTheReptilian
Posted on: 2010-11-14 19:26:22

*Grizz* good start of loving the lines, as i began to read the middle began to loose flow, punches were good, so was the concepts, but also lacked a bit of vocab and wordplay homes, fav line was the "SHOES UNTIED" line as the flow was killah! *Poet* wordplay was crazy but some of it had no meaning to the text, flow was off a bit at some points, the complexety was there with the concepts, multis were also off at some points, fav line was your closer ".warp back to the PRSENT, so when I say 'I SONNED'em' I actually MEAN-it! " dope finisher!! 10-10 but one took it for me with an allround better verse Voted: GRizzEAT / GodTheReptilian
Posted on: 2010-11-14 22:11:11

^^^ obviously voted without reading the expo. Every line in the verse had a double or triple meaning...and the wordplay made absolute sense...Long bar rhyme scheme (flow)...similar to Lupe. Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-11-14 22:23:16

Technically its what you would call double and triple entendre. If you dont know...look it up. Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-11-14 22:32:50

no hate str8 up poet dope verse like FIRE but the complexcity of it fuckedit i just took 5 minutes to read the expo ( i get it the verse is better now) but styll in actual shit you cant give a expo so thats for them cinema fans ya dig giving it to the opener Voted: GRizzEAT / GodTheReptilian
Posted on: 2010-11-14 23:59:24

poet homie you send me a PM asking me to look at this, i took the fair vote so get over it maybe you should sned messages asking fo fair votes cause ill actually vote fair mate. and i did read the expo but its not about that, shit sholud be easier to understand, you change it from a battle to a fucken history lesson Voted: GRizzEAT / GodTheReptilian
Posted on: 2010-11-15 03:52:24

I appreciate the fair vote, thats what I expect...but dont say that the wordplay does not make sense when in fact it does...along with the rest of the verse...a battle verse is much more than glorified "gun play" and homosexual innuendos...I mean how many times is shit like that going to be recycled and reused. When you can battle, and then give your audience a little knowledge to take home with them...thats emceeing in my eyes. How many ways came a gun work...one way. How many ways can someone be gay...one way. Of course if this was audio, I wouldnt be so detailed and abstract. Considering its text, you can really emphasis your point. Trying too hard? I dont think so...I ghostwrite for a living...I have many styles/schemes and trust me RULE and Pervus...neither of either of your styles of composition is difficult to come by. The style that you see here is the one I chose...look at any of my battles and you will understand. I change it everytime. I dont try hard enough...I'm tired of text anyway...I'd rather go to what I know best audio. Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-11-15 05:49:09

yooooo daaawwwg Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-11-15 11:30:45

jjjjj Voted: GRizzEAT / GodTheReptilian
Posted on: 2010-11-15 13:11:43

One had stronger concepts and made them clearer in his punches. Other definitely had some nice punches knocking about, but needs to work more on clarifying them in their structure in order to make it less awkward for the reader. Comes down to better conceptual punches at the end of the day, always. Only the fairest. Voted: GRizzEAT / GodTheReptilian
Posted on: 2010-11-15 16:22:22

close batt but felt one came harder fv vbf Voted: GRizzEAT / GodTheReptilian
Posted on: 2010-11-15 17:59:22

Griz got it vote back Voted: GRizzEAT / GodTheReptilian
Posted on: 2010-11-15 20:46:16

BOTH DID HELLA MAD ON THEY BARS. BOTH HAD SOME SERIOUS WORD PLAY IN THIS ONE. BUT ONE TOOK THIS FOR ME WITH THE CONSISTENCY AND AGGRESSION USED IN THE BATTLE. NO DOUBT. NO H8 EVER!! ALWAYS FAIR. REPSECT THE VOTE! Voted: GRizzEAT / GodTheReptilian
Posted on: 2010-11-15 23:23:44

wasnt diggin it Voted: GRizzEAT / GodTheReptilian
Posted on: 2010-11-16 04:14:36

One had alotta mehh concpets but some decent punches in there, started off pretty slow imo... the other sorta did too much and it reflected on the punches, also some of the wordplay was forced... overall ima say punches were about equal, both had there ups and downs.. felt ones verse was better set up structurely and worded better for a more enjoyable and smoother read Voted: GRizzEAT / GodTheReptilian
Posted on: 2010-11-16 08:53:56

VB NH Voted: GRizzEAT / GodTheReptilian
Posted on: 2010-11-16 13:20:54