DAMN................ ..Aint nuttin but HoodricH in this BITCH! Lets GET IT!! Posted on: 2010-05-04 19:48:17

hit me up for expos... like I said this is a family affair... May go hard, Rhet go hard.. it's HOODRICH! Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-05-04 19:52:53

explain this before i vote.... Your wanna SPAR CLOWN?? ya verse is a suicide letter to a Dead Poet; you've never been 'live'... why START NOW... i don't understand ? or maybe over my head ? Voted: Mayneak / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2010-05-04 20:04:39

why he gonna stat being 'live' ...he dead in the water sending basically his own suicide note to a Dead Poet ;) hope that clears it up homie... thanks for askin EJT Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-05-04 20:10:35

Ok i seen da forum post on this and... Imma say one came a lil better to me. He had some more DOWN TO EARTH lines ha. The other reminded me of Chizzel : to much jam packed wordplay..it throws the flow of the verse off for me. Most of the lines had some dope wordplay but the overall effect of the punches was rendered. Keepin it real. Voted: Mayneak / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2010-05-04 21:49:01

may: damn may's opener was fuckin amazing.. set up, buildip, complexity, multi's, flow.. everything there just matched it out well... lmfao the "moving arms' concept was dope as hell... haha 'feedback' line was hilarious... closer i had to read a couple times.. haha, but it was dope nameplay/wordplay.. definitely hit hard.. verse was very well rounded in all aspects and very hard 2 beat.. I really can't give much critique on that.... Rhetorik: the opening 'clover field' Line was a nice concept and hit.. felt the following line was decent.. using "iron thoughts' as a connection... the "you never been live line" was decent... the 'score board' line was nicely set up.. the following 2 lines i wasn't feeling so much on the punch end... the "Dublin bitch" had me laughing... haha the "left in the finals" was a dope concept... closer was pretty damn dope 2... Both had some nice ass line in there verse.. one came with a lotta jabs and uppercuts.. another had great build ups for strong haymakers.. it was great battle.. ones verse was just 2 well rounded Voted: Mayneak / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2010-05-04 21:56:31

Respect RhetoriK, hot drop...Appreciate those who take time to explain...Good luck famz...Hoodrich!!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-05-04 22:21:39

K try this again.... Props btw Brag about how SLUGS FROM THE HEATER POP? or get BLOOD ON YA SNEAKER TOPS? You’ve no GLOCKS, YOU JUST SMALL CHANGE n wouldn’t “Call the SHOTS FROM A LONG RANGE” in a “PUB WITH A SPEAKER BOX”!! Mult ies were fuckin sick here no joke.. Lol at call shots in a pub wit speaker box... Nice punch Step right up, be the next TORTURE VICTIM? on a scale of 50, its where FOURTY SIX IS, WATER PISTOLS doesn’t PROVE YOU HARD OR A GOD you only acting like “‘MOVING ARMS’ IS A JOB”…as a MORGUE ASSISTANT!! Lol same as before, everything was pretty damn good, flowed nicely, punch set and... Landed like a mug HE WACK AND A JERK My flow is ALL OF SMOOTHIES, CALL OF DUTY only time you SEE GATS WHEN THEY BURST didn't love this but still pretty nice.. im a real SLUGGER WHEN IM BOXIN SENSELESS so a “HOOKER ON THE DOCKS WITH DENTURES” is the only time you getting “FEEDBACK ON YOUR WORK”!! That line was where its at... Real sick my dude.. “On your bike” son, don’t NEED GUYS LIKE THIS BASTID to BE HYPED WHEN HE RAPPIN you could “tour de gun collection” until we SEE SNIPER’S REACTION’S Man that wad prob ur best line for me, nasty as fuck... face it, ya NEVER DOPE if “Rhe using” a PEDAL JOKE” then see “RE CYCLE” IN ACTION”!! Lol and as usual... Great ending... All in all.. Great verse high 9 maybe a 10.. God damn may.. You gonna be in that final 4.... But anyway nice add multies, punches were sick as fuck.. Major props my dude... Ok.. Now on to my nigga rhet it's over kid ...you-KNOW I KILL.. i ain't even gotta turn Ireland to 'CLOVER: FIELD' - I don' already 'Ironed Thoughts' ...and trumitized you; maybe you should 'HOLD THE STEEL' -lol- Lol very clever my man... Thats a nice play on irish luck.. Hold the steel.. That shit got me laughing man Leave this faggot 'ARSE(on): OUT' ...he the local 'spokes: person' when his town's potato CART'S DOWN - Your wanna SPAR CLOWN?? ya verse is a suicide letter to a Dead Poet; you've never been 'live'... why START NOW -??- Liked the dead poet suicide shit.. Nice fo sho... You don't wanna see that 'FOUR DOOR' I'll pull this 'square: number' like a mufuckin' SCORE BOARD - He's never let the GUNS BLOW ..'FARVA, shut the fuck up!' Only May would be #2 to an UNKNOWN ARTIST X_x Hahahah real dope there.. That was fuckin nasty my dude, real cool concept there.... and you a 'green Monster' Shamus? ...with my 'Inc./Ink' you can't TOUCH THE KID; only time you 'stir the pot' is in stews at PUBS'N'SHIT ... May; you're Irish why your money ain't 'DUBLIN: BITCH?' - You lucky this ain't the tourney, that'd be TRAGIC KID ..cause this 'Bird' would get 'left in the Finals' ..on some 'MAGIC(Johnson): TRICK; straigt 'Vietnam' ...'CLAP A BITCH' ; 'Mayneak the brainchild' won't 'see daylight' 'mother: fuck' ya cause Son, ya POPs ain't HAVIN IT -damn!!- That magic bird shit was real nasty my man... Great ending loved it the refs u made were sick as fuck... Again all in all this is the best battle I've read in a while no bullshit. High 9 to a 10... Lemme read it all again hahahha.... Ok i got my pick... Pretty hard but no coin flip.... Great battle fellas, would love some good feedback from either of you on my battle out right now... People sleepin on this Voted: Mayneak / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2010-05-05 02:00:21

wow i didn't know it was gonna look that bad i thought i made spaces for my feedback.. oh well respect yall Voted: Mayneak / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2010-05-05 02:02:05

Wow both of ur wordplay wre crazy! out of this world battle..may ur meta's are just mind blowing and rhet ur ur punches are complex as hell..well both were complex as hell realli lol. Step right up, be the next TORTURE VICTIM? on a scale of 50, its where FOURTY SIX IS,may that line was just to tite not the best out the verse but one fresh concept n rhet you-KNOW I KILL.. i ain't even gotta turn Ireland to 'CLOVER: FIELD' - I don' already 'Ironed Thoughts' ...and trumitized you; maybe you should 'HOLD THE STEEL that was ur best line..u went over aswell lol read the battle twice but one took it with the more simple but yet complex verse and fresher idea's..respect the both of u so you know its 100% fair..plz return fairs on ma recents if u get chance.props Voted: Mayneak / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2010-05-06 08:43:12

one came a harder with personals n consistency Voted: Mayneak / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2010-05-07 02:24:41

yeah! Voted: Mayneak / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2010-05-07 11:15:17

RhetoriK got this but i'm on a fair vote for this one. Voted: Mayneak / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2010-05-07 12:26:30

Yo Mayneak & RhetoriK from the same CREW????? LMAO Voted: Mayneak / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2010-05-07 12:27:27

Close battle Voted: Mayneak / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2010-05-07 16:40:40

Both wasa on they bullshit on this one.... but one had me goin a little better.... one verse was a little out there and some shit was a little forced no hate.... take easy Voted: Mayneak / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2010-05-07 17:35:22

I see this one endin soon so i'm gonna drop a quick vote first and then explain my vote in a lil. Voted: Mayneak / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2010-05-07 18:03:29

Mayneak: Brag about how SLUGS FROM THE HEATER POP? or get BLOOD ON YA SNEAKER TOPS? You’ve no GLOCKS, YOU JUST SMALL CHANGE n wouldn’t “Call the SHOTS FROM A LONG RANGE” in a “PUB WITH A SPEAKER BOX”!! ... Nice punch..not too direct though...but the setup and flow was real nice....... Step right up, be the next TORTURE VICTIM? on a scale of 50, its where FOURTY SIX IS, WATER PISTOLS doesn’t PROVE YOU HARD OR A GOD you only acting like “‘MOVING ARMS’ IS A JOB”…as a MORGUE ASSISTANT!!...lol kept consistent.... HE WACK AND A JERK My flow is ALL OF SMOOTHIES, CALL OF DUTY only time you SEE GATS WHEN THEY BURST im a real SLUGGER WHEN IM BOXIN SENSELESS so a “HOOKER ON THE DOCKS WITH DENTURES” is the only time you getting “FEEDBACK ON YOUR WORK”!!...hah i got the whole rhyme scheme the 2nd time i read it...flow was a lil confusing but solid punch... On your bike” son, don’t NEED GUYS LIKE THIS BASTID to BE HYPED WHEN HE RAPPIN you could “tour de gun collection” until we SEE SNIPER’S REACTION’S face it, ya NEVER DOPE if “Rhe using” a PEDAL JOKE” then see “RE CYCLE” IN ACTION”!!...wordplay was ight. overall a very solid 8 lines...jab after jab after jab...consistency was nice....... Rhet: it's over kid ...you-KNOW I KILL.. i ain't even gotta turn Ireland to 'CLOVER: FIELD' - I don' already 'Ironed Thoughts' ...and trumitized you; maybe you should 'HOLD THE STEEL' ... i really like the iron thought reference...but the ending of the whole thing kinda left me hangin... Leave this faggot 'ARSE(on): OUT' ...he the local 'spokes: person' when his town's potato CART'S DOWN - Your wanna SPAR CLOWN?? ya verse is a suicide letter to a Dead Poet; you've never been 'live'... why START NOW -?...multi's were scattered a little. concept was understandable....ag ain you lead up nicely.........You don't wanna see that 'FOUR DOOR' I'll pull this 'square: number' like a mufuckin' SCORE BOARD - He's never let the GUNS BLOW ..'FARVA, shut the fuck up!' Only May would be #2 to an UNKNOWN ARTIST....nothing really hit me here...a nice try at a personal but no punch or anything really. .............. and you a 'green Monster' Shamus? ...with my 'Inc./Ink' you can't TOUCH THE KID; only time you 'stir the pot' is in stews at PUBS'N'SHIT ... May; you're Irish why your money ain't 'DUBLIN: BITCH?'...haha i feel this line tho...wordplay was pretty sick but this time with your line, i felt the leadup was the weaker part and the actual 'punch' was nicer............You lucky this ain't the tourney, that'd be TRAGIC KID ..cause this 'Bird' would get 'left in the Finals' ..on some 'MAGIC(Johnson): TRICK; straigt 'Vietnam' ...'CLAP A BITCH' ; 'Mayneak the brainchild' won't 'see daylight' 'mother: fuck' ya cause Son, ya POPs ain't HAVIN IT -... Ended nicely, concepts were there. Overall i think you have a good overall texting game, you just need to polish up and figure out how to reword some of your idea sometimes cause sometimes you have great concepts but the way you say them take a little bit out of them...Mid-High... Voted: Mayneak / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2010-05-07 18:15:00