Fair Voters Club, not a line by line because it's too long, but good battle...S T O Y: Most of the battle your syllable count was fucked up and all scattered, you'd have a 4 syllable multie and theen rhyme it with a six syllable multie, most of your punches were average, but there were a couple that really stood out, your concepts were amazing though, .....Best line: ma RHYMES EASILY BREAK CHUMPS..as for marK? the FREE'S TOPPING HIS ASS, i MEAN..he LOST, FEEBLE RAPS can't 'EVEN STOP WHAT I HAVE'..nd this guys "LINES NEED TO 'SHAPE UP'" .take a GEOMETRY CLASS!!...really good concept & execution here, but like I said, the syllable count and flow were fucked up, I think that was your main problem............. ....remarK: Your punches were insane...your concepts and punches hit hard constintly...good work, lol, the multies were on-point and your mini-punches hit as hard as they could with the concept givin, best line: you wouldn't 'catch what he’s writing' w/ TRACKED HIGHWAY MAIL! so what’s this Boy Bold Bout?, we all know “ T O Y Sold Out" like BLACK FRIDAY SALES!....Overall: I know you guys will prolly bitch saying "I didn't read" because I quoted your first lines, but you guys had dominant openers, and lacked consistancy, it usually shows with a mediocre opener a great middle w/ a shitty closer, but here it's the great opener, with mediocre middles and ends, I've seen both do better, but I think one underestimated the other, and resulted in a loss, good battle, fair is in, .:God Knows.!:. 8-8, low to high. Voted: S A L T / remarK
Posted on: 2009-12-20 13:09:53

yezuhhh. 16 barz. nice, tek needs to chill da fuck out hahahaha. Voted: S A L T / remarK
Posted on: 2009-12-20 14:41:40

I'll put the “Barrel To This Fruit” like WINE HOUSES .... lol ... dope .... one deffinately hit harder with the punches here .... peace! Voted: S A L T / remarK
Posted on: 2009-12-20 15:45:58

S T O Y; ma RHYMES EASILY BREAK CHUMPS..as for marK? the FREE'S TOPPING HIS ASS, i MEAN..he LOST, FEEBLE RAPS can't 'EVEN STOP WHAT I HAVE'..nd this guys "LINES NEED TO 'SHAPE UP'" .take a GEOMETRY CLASS!! - Concept & flow were all on point but I thought the punch fell short of its full potential. Maybe could have been worded better. - im COLD WIT DA BEEF, KID.. ma TEKS WILL BLOW..but besides 'guns', i'll put 'MARK(s) IN HIS ASS'..*hope he 'FLEXIBLE'*..SCARIN HIS BACK like that 'COLONIAL TREATMENT!(no hate)!whips..or SHARPEN'D TIP GLASS!! -Haha this was a dope punch. Use of nameplay was niice.-LOOK, YER NO ONE, maybe some cute lines...a nice TARGET mah TEXT CAN HANDLE, CHILD!! so if we talkin bout SUGAR CODED, .MARK IT(market), nd then CHECK THE CANDY ISLE!! ma SMACKS BE MAJOR! makin this FAG'S CHEEK CRATORED!! homie, im servin *Bombs*..call me an IRAQUEE WAITOR!! COMPETE? DUDE'S A PIECE OF SHIT.. ill *MARK* HIS FACE WITH THE PUMP, then *REMARK* IT AGAIN, JUST FOR FUN, nd COMPLETE WHO HE IS!! - This was a nice sequence of punches, starting with the candy punch (humour) lol @ the iraquee waiter line. Multies could have been cleaned up a little bit but punches were evident. - he 'FUCKIN WITH BARS'? ill 'DROP EM..SHOOT HIM'..then come "RUSHIN(Russian) TO MARKS(karl marx)" like a COMMUNIST MOVEMENT!! (omg!!) im DOPE WITH KEYS..'CLOBBER' this 'BITCH WITH COLD WORDS' .or ill 'HOLD THE PIECE' nd let 'GO ND FREE' the 'BULLETS, JEEZ!!' nd as for WINS, KID?..i would say no chance, but he be gettin 'SHIT HE DON'T DESERVED' like OBAMA with NOBEL PEACE!!! - These punches were probably your best piece of work. Wordplay was creative n the concepts were fire. Siick shiit. - deckin 'MARK, RIPPIN TEETH, WITH SOME BLOWS', "HOOK POUND EM HIGHER"..let the 'MARTIANS SEE WHAT I DO TO MAH FOES"..then i'll 'LOOK DOWN ON EM 'N SMILE'. wen it comes to level, you 'FAR FROM ME, OCK..YOU NOT EVEN CLOSE TO BEIN CLOSE'!! -Wasn’t really feeling this punch, thought it was un-like you to drop something so basic, no hate - beat me? this LAME FAG WILL LOSE THIS!!. its not even LIKE CLOSE.. this bitch so easy to beat, a CAVE MAN COULD DO IT.. you fuckin GEICO!!wen it comes to SPITTEN DOPE..i TOP YA -- EASE, nd RIPPEN FOLK, ill CHOP YA--THREES, then wen the FISTS DONE GO, i DROP YA--SLEEP (KNOCK OUT)..so "have a nice QUANZA"--*LEAVE* (IM OUT).....- Closer was a let down also, was expecting more from your last couple of lines after the communist & obama punches. - Overall some siick concepts & some fire punches, some meh lines but a very niice verse. Voted: S A L T / remarK
Posted on: 2009-12-20 18:14:27

you wouldn't 'catch what he’s writing' w/ TRACKED HIGHWAY MAIL! so what’s this Boy Bold Bout?, we all know “ T O Y Sold Out ” like BLACK FRIDAY SALES! this GUYS SLOUCHIN' my :HIGH: COUNT IS.. like 5 OUNCES! there's somethin' Narrow In His Roots so I'll put the “Barrel To This Fruit” like WINE HOUSES! - Opener was sick, but the line that followed was raw as fuck. Good way to open your verse - everyone on the GRID SAY YOU SUCK if you open your LID?, TRE'S DO BUST! and they'll make this boy's RIBS “PLAY TWO-TOUCH” your bars are VOID TO MY DROPS i'll put “T O Y IN'A BOX” cuz this “KID PLAYS TOO MUCH!” said i SPIT THE RARE FLAMES he'll never find a “BITCH THAT CARES” DAME & it aint that CHICKS AINT FAIR MAYNE they just know this KIDS A BARE LAME! so when you Shout n' Drop It?, your “Out Of Pocket” like LINT n' SPARE CHANGE! - Felt there was too much filler going on here, jabs here and there but nothing major, however your out of pocket line hit hard - don't act like your CAMP'S DOPE FAGGOT cuz ya'll CAN'T FLOW HAVOC my wordplay will have you throw up “Da-White Flag” like a foul on the OrLANDO MAGIC!(Dwight Johnson) why's that? well its cuz this imPOSTER STEPS FER' NOTHIN'! every time he “Kicks It, There's a Penalty” like SOCCER REPERCUSSIONS! - Two very creative punches here. Flow was smooth & the concepts were original. - You can BET MENTALLY i conjure the BEST REMEDY! I'm fast to FLEX ENEMIES da same way they DECKED KENNEDY! my words real, you think this Fucker-Meant-His? Mark got the “Tougher Sentence” like DEATH PENALTIES! I can beat you with 'no delivery' like DIJORNO CUZ, THE BEST AH' FREES! i Hit-'Em-Wit-Fear plus this Bitch-Is-A-Queer so he “DIPS TO THE REAR” like a PORNO DOES EVENTUALLY!(Lmfao!) - Death penalties line I felt was a little soft by your standards but the porno line was funny as fuck, once again flow was very niice. - Think you got the W?, den STOY IS BENT i write witt'a POISON PEN so you and your ANNOYIN' FRIENDS can “Get Mad” like ROIDS IN MEN! your BOYS IS DENSE need to quit TOYIN' GENTS get real ! .. cuz you know your GOONS BOUNCE and ya'll “ZOOM OUT" like an AVOIDING LENSE!! .. Spectacular Vernacular .. -Closer was siick, concept was hot & was the perfect way to finish off a verse. - Overall a pretty solid verse, one or two light punches but had some original concepts in there with a smooth flow… Voted: S A L T / remarK
Posted on: 2009-12-20 18:14:48

Overall…My vote goes to the person that was more creative & experimental with the direction his punches were going in…Im cool with both so you know its no hate…I got a dozen battles out…Ya’ll mutha’fuckers can return it sometime…One high 9, One medium 9...Fairness is dropped…Respect it… Voted: S A L T / remarK
Posted on: 2009-12-20 18:15:24

High 8 to low 9. One just delivered there punches a lot harder then the other, therefore takes the W here. Good battle. Voted: S A L T / remarK
Posted on: 2009-12-20 23:41:01

fair vote. Voted: S A L T / remarK
Posted on: 2009-12-21 01:11:30

SMACK The Shiet Out You!!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-12-21 17:52:25

close Voted: S A L T / remarK
Posted on: 2009-12-21 18:14:06

fuck a line by line breakdown. this was a good battle right here. one had better punches in my opinion. That's y my vote goes to him. Respect it. hi 8 to lo 9 Voted: S A L T / remarK
Posted on: 2009-12-22 15:53:47

FVVB Voted: S A L T / remarK
Posted on: 2009-12-22 18:31:33

REMARK DID PRETTY GOOD Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-12-22 21:43:32

4-6? lmao... Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-12-22 23:44:19

fv vb Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-12-23 01:45:51

remarK requested that the 6-5 & 7-6 be removed, both votes were in his favour... Voted: S A L T / remarK
Posted on: 2009-12-23 11:38:32