A lot of played lines Jacko. Should be easy. I got you tomorrow.... Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-07 01:05:22

We'll see, Every battle i've read of yours was played, My lines are sick, dont cry or sway votes, Yeh work on it all day and send tommorrow, i wrote mine in less then 10 minutes kid.... Jack Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-07 14:52:18

i sent this on the 6th, ur a lame i told u in emails u would either take forever to write your verse because ur not shit, or u wouldnt even reply bitch... Like i said Jacks the best, i keystyled this in less than 15 minutes and have the emails to you, along with the start of the battle time above to prove it... ur trash on this site, leave and die Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-10 14:49:06

Don't get mad because I have a life. you'll get a response soon. Very soon. maybe by tonight even? Shit i unno...I still gotta key up verses for this other dude but I guess i'll push you up a spot and get this shit over with before you continue bitching. Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-10 21:51:29

Alright this is how KOS does it. I.J knows the deal. Jack: "Your RAPS CLOWN? IT'S PURGERY!! i think u should BACK DOWN AND URGENTLY cuz if yall think this CATS BOUT TO MURDER ME i'll get HARD WITH THE DROPS and put "BARZ ON THE SPOT" like "CRACK HOUSE SECURITY!!" - sick opener. I always teach cats to open with a personal or a nameflip as well as to end the verse with a personal or nameflip. You got it going on from the start homie. "I'm PROVIN A SICKER TITAN leave u SHITTY AND CRIPPLED OOZIN DISFIGURED, AITE BITCH?! plus i'm WITTY WITH RIDDLES ready to leave "Barz Shut Down" like "CITY OFFICIALS REMOVIN THE LIQUOR LICENSE!!" - another hot bar with another personal and nameflip. I've read the whole verse though and you gotta be careful about not overkilling the nameflips. Usually one or two in a verse is sufficient, but after that they get a little stale. Still, this was a hot bar. "what you're TEXTIN IS FRAIL you'll get WRECKED AND IMPALED n "Fucked By the slug" like "SEX WITH A SNAIL" so u wouldnt see "Barz in The Future" if u were "DESTINED FOR JAIL!!" - fucked by the slug/sex with a snail was pretty fresh but also a little bit south of cheese homie. Nobody has sex with a snail, dig? lol Next... "See i'm keystyle, and send first, so PLAY IT DEFENSIVELY be happy i aint BREAKIN A SWEAT WITH BEEF cuz you aint TAKIN THE BEST OF ME cuz if i "Burried You Alive with Your Laptop's" the only "WAY THAT YOUR "TEXTIN DEEP!" - Na fam, this was a filler bar that didn't do much for me. Concepts were ok, but just not quite hitting as hard as the rest of the verse. "you're a SCRUBBISH ORPHAN i'm done son cuz yuh STUFF IS BORIN Homie you wouldnt "Have Barz" if u were the "FUCKIN WARDEN" - nameflips are close to being overdone at this point, plus this bar coulda been hella dope but it needed a better setup. Overall, hot verse though and pretty standard for your style and quality bro. (Hit me up with a pm btw, asap) Barz: "Dumpin-gats? Stop LYIN WHEN TXT’n RHYMES or my gats’ll leave a Jumpin-Jack but he aint TRYIN TO EXERCISE!" - goin toe to toe by opening with a personal and nameflip. Good shit. This was solid and fresh. "What a MEAN THING TO SAY!(Nottt) I son-cats wit dumb-raps, so I’m above-Jack..(?).. like a QUEEN, KING, OR ACE! Keyin rhymes? You are not-a-better-author. .ya SHIT IS SO WHACK.. I’ll get him dropped-from-helicop ters n tell em “HIT THE ROAD, JACK!” - great concepts here in both lines for a real solid bar. The first line was a clever punch and the second line was a nice wordplay punch. Props for that. "You can SPIT IT, PAUSE then THINK ITS HOT. But you actually-lost-it, so in this battle “Jacks-in”/Jackson-a -coffin like i MEANT TA DROP tha KING OF POP!(R.I.P.)" - same thing as I told you that the nameflips can get to a point where they're overdone, but this one was still fresh and still gets the daps. Nice work. "Dude is WAVIN TECS? SPRAYIN SETS? Only when he usin-computers to maneuver-a-shooter. His rhymes like funeral-music cuz I AINT IMPRESSED, THEY’RE “PLAYED TO DEATH!!!” - this is a good personal to an extent because of the fact that he did "overkill" the nameplay, but you're doin it too so this bar was just ehh...nothing to get too excited about. You both had one "filler" bar that didn't do much. "You aint BLAZIN OFF THE HAZE I’M BUYIN. Or bustin-gats, ‘da-fuck-is-that? Ay I’ll put the “pump-to-Jack” like tryna RAISE THE CAR TO CHANGE THE TIRE!" - Haha...nice closer. Like I said before: start strong, end strong, and a personal and/or nameflip in the opener and closer is a good way to go out. Damn this is close as shit. Both were hella evenly matched. Multis was about a tie, Wordplay was about a tie, Metas and Similies - tie, Flow was about a tie, and punches were about a tie. I think that Barz had the slightly more humorous punches and Jack had that one bar that I just didn't dig, so by the slimmest of possible margins my vote tilts to Barz. Close as hell though and could've gone either way. Respect brothers. Voted: O_G / I gOt BaRz
Posted on: 2009-07-10 22:54:50

LOL HOLY FUCK. Nice vote; maybe Jack will respect your opinion and finally admit defeat. :) Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-10 23:03:04

Yeah i didnt take my time, it was "OFF OF THE TOP" if i would have spent a week of my verse like he did it would be a wrap, This is what we talked about in the email "Barz" u fuckin idiot, Same shit i told u before... Good battle tho, u did "Okay", I still think u lost, And i'm going to send u a battle in 7 days, i've never spent more than an hour on a battle... :) go 2 hell... lol i'm mad Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-11 00:30:02

but the hit the road jack line was funny Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-11 00:30:25

I finally got some respect from ya eh? Its about time. You decided to be an asshole in PM but when you see what the kid can do you're not as much of a dick...Oh well, guess thats how I earn ya respect ehh Jack? Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-11 00:39:59

jack, ida gave it to you, BUT, this line, fucked up everything because like one thing rhymeed.... I'm PROVIN A SICKER TITAN leave u SHITTY AND CRIPPLED OOZIN DISFIGURED, AITE BITCH?! plus i'm WITTY WITH RIDDLES ready to leave "Barz Shut Down" like "CITY OFFICIALS REMOVIN THE LIQUOR LICENSE!!"( Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-11 09:04:50

fair one is in. Good battle ya'll Voted: O_G / I gOt BaRz
Posted on: 2009-07-11 14:29:04

fv Voted: O_G / I gOt BaRz
Posted on: 2009-07-11 14:37:31

gb vb Voted: O_G / I gOt BaRz
Posted on: 2009-07-13 21:08:55

jack is winner Voted: O_G / I gOt BaRz
Posted on: 2009-07-13 21:36:17

GB FV VBF NEVA H8 Voted: O_G / I gOt BaRz
Posted on: 2009-07-13 22:04:00

And for the Record Infamous and I are beefing wether he will admit it or not, He's Voted against me Every battle the past 2 months... U can see for yourself, Even against weak cats... Take away that vote and jack wins :) Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-14 19:58:53